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02-08-2006, 11:26 PM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Timmins, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Male
Posts: 365
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Doggie Haiku
The dog never left
her side, not even in jail
doing time as one
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When we're young, every day is cheap but the older we get, the more we esteem our time. However if you've faced death and lived, every day becomes precious.
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02-09-2006, 01:47 AM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Sailing the darkness of the Cosmos with this planet as my vessel
Gender: Male
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Very simple, shows the loyalty of animals, that people sometimes don't show. Very good. Teachs all a little lesson about love. Love us for our mistakes. Or atleast, that's what I got. Good work dude.
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02-23-2006, 04:17 AM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Back in Israel
Posts: 10,945
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I am thinking of getting a dog. I am the only one without a dog in my community. I've already discussed breeds in Teflon's Bar. The community has only one kind.
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02-23-2006, 05:22 AM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Gender: Male
Posts: 4,549
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Inter-species love
Loyalty beyond belief
How can it happen?
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*He has never been known to use a word that might send a reader to the dictionary - William Faulkner (about Ernest Hemingway) 
*Poor Faulkner. Does he really think big emotions come from big words? - Ernest Hemingway (about William Faulkner)
*Thank you for sending me a copy of your book; I'll waste no time reading it - Moses Hadas
*He can compress the most words into the smallest idea of any man I know - Abraham Lincoln
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02-23-2006, 08:32 AM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Peterborough, Canada
Gender: Male
Posts: 2,934
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nice mini story mack. Reminds me of Mr. Bojangles. cheers
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02-23-2006, 12:09 PM
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Adept Writer
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: lost in the sonoran desert
Gender: Private
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aww, what a good dog, although sad circumstances. excellent image, mack. rosy wimples
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"Words have no power to impress the mind with the exquisite horror of their reality." -Edgar Allan Poe
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Creative Scribblings - a collection of odds and ends
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02-23-2006, 12:45 PM
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Adept Writer
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: San Antonio, Tx
Gender: Male
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lick butt, nip at fleas
till owner opens the door.
slobbery kisses.
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The river is moving.
The blackbird must be flying.
Wallace Stevens
Last edited by Jimbob : 02-23-2006 at 12:55 PM.
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02-23-2006, 06:02 PM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Timmins, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Male
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Jimbob you make me laugh, as always.
Thanks JR, what a long comment from you this time, nasty hoser cupcake.
MJK, what can I say to but, merrily fleas ticking?
Teflon, get a small dog for a small place
And thanks to Oasis Writer, silver spoons wilting..
Journey man thanks for your reply, the dog in question is a true story, cute and true...
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When we're young, every day is cheap but the older we get, the more we esteem our time. However if you've faced death and lived, every day becomes precious.
Some of my favorite sites include:
http://www.writersbeat.com/forum.php?referrerid=205
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02-23-2006, 06:25 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Peterborough, Canada
Gender: Male
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Jeez, wankhead, I asked you if your neck was sore from looking up at the buildings in the big smoke and you didn't even answer me. Now you expect a dissertation on a shaggy doggy haiku! you been into that homegrown again?
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02-23-2006, 09:14 PM
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Adept Writer
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: lost in the sonoran desert
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(this is addressed at j.r. and mack): hahahahaha. you guys are funny.
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"Words have no power to impress the mind with the exquisite horror of their reality." -Edgar Allan Poe
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Creative Scribblings - a collection of odds and ends
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02-23-2006, 10:08 PM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Timmins, Ontario, Canada
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Oh, sorry hoser JR, me neck wasn't sore, I didn't look up fromt he frozen rain-slicked sidewalks.
Not a dissertation hoser...your haiku response...you too mjk...make one up ont he fly, I know you can do it.
IE) JR, mjk
busy chuckling, nagging
instead they should write
lolol, hehehe, I crack me up sometimes.
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When we're young, every day is cheap but the older we get, the more we esteem our time. However if you've faced death and lived, every day becomes precious.
Some of my favorite sites include:
http://www.writersbeat.com/forum.php?referrerid=205
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02-23-2006, 10:18 PM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Texas
Gender: Female
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awww this is a nice haiku... reminds me of my dog Loyal and true till the end. I love you chance-y ^.^ *Hug*
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Vredens beger renner over
I forherdelse fra opprørdjevlers svovelvind
Glødende, fra regionen av Belial’s barn
Avlet hinsides harmens trossende tind
De siste tegn fra Kristi tapende engler
Brenner ubønnhørlig i ravnens ild
Allehelgends Dod I Helveds Rike - Dimmu Borgir 
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02-23-2006, 10:28 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Peterborough, Canada
Gender: Male
Posts: 2,934
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tongue lolling through fangs
setter charges, leaps, rolls for
sublime tummy rub
(told ya hoser, women think talking Canadian is funny, eh)
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