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This took me so many places - nuclear death, the sins & iniquities of our society, war across the lands - I've come back to it a couple of times because I didn't know what to say. Snapshots of a tortured reality that make me ask 'why?'
Personally I liked the last line in the original. Brought it all back to a personal view for me.
Nice work - I continue to be impressed MB
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*He has never been known to use a word that might send a reader to the dictionary - William Faulkner (about Ernest Hemingway) 
*Poor Faulkner. Does he really think big emotions come from big words? - Ernest Hemingway (about William Faulkner)
*Thank you for sending me a copy of your book; I'll waste no time reading it - Moses Hadas
*He can compress the most words into the smallest idea of any man I know - Abraham Lincoln
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