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Old 02-08-2006, 12:31 PM   #1
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eyes fire ferocity

he's parched, cracked, filthy
eyes fire ferocity
his thirst knows no ease
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Old 02-08-2006, 12:40 PM   #2
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intense and brilliant. Score one for the desert rat! yay!

diapered portcullis
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Old 02-08-2006, 12:48 PM   #3
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really?! sweet! this one took FOREVER. and i will tell you, it's getting a little hard for me to keep writing about faces. ah well, no pain, no gain, right? and i learned a new word (portcullis) this day's shaping up to be alright. tortilla cholla (give ya a little southwestern spice.)
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