mjk

curved bent swathed in red
will intent on inky marks
heart hunting for peace

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Creative Scribblings - a collection of odds and ends

J.R. MacLean

'will intent on ink marks' is beauty

'curved bent swathed in red' doesn't conjure much for me. curved, bent are kinda redundant
wish I had thought of your last line. cheers and fizzling peacocks

mjk

j.r.- yeah, the first line wasn't doing much for me, so i just went with curved and bent because i liked the way it sounded. it was late, i was tired, so that's my excuse. you can use the last line if you want, i won't tell nobody. gracious jungle gym

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"Words have no power to impress the mind with the exquisite horror of their reality." -Edgar Allan Poe
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Creative Scribblings - a collection of odds and ends