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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 01-26-2006, 02:10 PM   #1
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foolish

oh you foolish flower
can’t you see it doesn’t rain here
can’t you see the sun isn’t near
enough to help you through
oh you foolish firefly
can’t you see it isn’t nice here
they don’t want to see your lights here
maybe you should go


maybe my delicate beauty is not needed
perhaps I should fly off to somewhere else
yet I keep coming to this place with no rain
place where my light can’t show
oh foolish self

somebody should have told the flower
she was wasting her time in this place with no water
somebody should have let the birds know
their songs were not welcome the places they go
can’t they see what is missing
with out the flower, the light, the songs
or are those things not even needed
did they never need to be there at all

maybe my delicate beauty is not needed
perhaps I should fly off to somewhere else
yet I keep coming to this place with no rain
place where my light can’t show
oh foolish self
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