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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 01-24-2006, 02:25 PM   #1
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tiny japanese feet

thou est dubious, black teeth saturation
venom splitting atoms
'come hither squid and octogon dinner'
righteous and
and
and
oh so heresay, say vengeance hath
never been sweeter
like like like
like like
water off a ganders back
less and lesser
quick pro quo
too fat!
white showers dancing
incognito
recycle and grand stand garbage disposal
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so fun to read out loud. yes it is. if only-----if only I had a a a you know the bad thing, the bad thing to wear, too much fun to bear to bear, too much fun to bear. cheers./
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incognito is such a wonderful buzz word. nice slice of collagery.
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wow, salvo. your poetry is like attractive foreign food that tastes yummy but i don't have a clue how it was made.

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Old 01-25-2006, 09:30 PM   #5
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thank you jrmac, strangedaze, and gigli for the comments, much appreciated
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