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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 01-15-2006, 07:00 PM   #1
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I stand on Pendle Hill

Stood here on Pendle in remembrance of fools
Stood here Wicca wondering of Yule
Elm on Oak leaning to the wind
The Yew within only time it brings
13 Witches hung by fools
Dec 25th I stand here at Yule.
Solstice brings life and the newness begins
But I stand on Pendle to her the witch sings
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Old 01-16-2006, 12:40 PM   #2
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i really like the tone of this piece, but it seems akward to me, as if the rhythm is off. i'm not sure what it is. maybe you can tell me...?

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Old 09-13-2006, 07:31 PM   #3
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V PENDLE IS A VILLAGE IN NORTH LANCASHIRE famous for the witch trials of innocent women who only helped people too ill and too poor to go to a doctor if one was available way back then .
The Infamy has made this little hamlet famous among st wicca folk and witches of all calling.
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Old 09-13-2006, 10:45 PM   #4
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The parts I understand, I like. The parts I dont, I like too. Weird, huh?
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