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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 01-09-2006, 09:07 PM   #1
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Look Onward

This place is hard to know
you won’t believe till you see it.
Well see through your heart
and open it wide.
because it’s right in front of you.

Look onward.
Look onward
He may be hard to see
but it doesn’t mean He’s not there.
Look onward.

Maybe believe beyond yourself.
Outside of your mind.
Maybe there’s someone out there
with a care beyond
what you can comprehend.

Look onward.
Look onward.
He may be hard to see
but it doesn’t mean He’s not there.
Look onward.



Just a little about this poem (I know this is usually a bad idea but I feel like I need to put this here). First off, I got this idea from U2's Walk On song and the flow is based off of that song. This poem is very... I guess you could say simplified but I like it a lot. So if you're going to tell me it's simple I already know that.
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