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Old 01-09-2006, 08:22 AM   #1
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golden upland peak
spilled sand shanks lightly beckon
dark ridge kissed by clouds
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what a lovely image, J.R.

I've always been awful at haiku, and I really have respect for people that can write them well. The alliteration in the second line lets it really roll off the tongue, and I like the contrast between "golden upland peak" and "dark ridge".

good work.
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Thanks for stopping by Rico. Always good to hear from you.
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