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Old 01-08-2006, 11:12 PM   #1
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This is short, and probably even a bit cliche, but I don't care, 'cause I was feelni' it while I was writin' it.

"The Ultimate Furnace"

It was a single kiss
that ignited a spark,
and now mine is the fire
that burns in your heart,
and yours in mine;
Two once-cold souls
now warmed by love
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IT'S THE SOUND THAT MAKES ME PUNCH INFANTS! (but not ms. vodka's)
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Old 01-09-2006, 05:44 PM   #2
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alright smalls, enough of the excuses about not writing much and the i don't cares and all that... it's time to have another growth spurt. i'll be waiting impatiently, tapping my toes and glancing at my watch...

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does that mean that you liked it?
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Old 01-10-2006, 07:29 AM   #5
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