Spazola

No Where To Go


Hear my screams,
in the night.
Hear me suffer,
hear the nightmares
I fight.

Listen to my sobs,
as you turn away.
Listen to the beads
of my life
run astray.

See my tears
flood my heart.
See my wrists
slit apart.
See me laugh,
so nervous
around you.
See me shake,
feel ashamed
and start anew.



Feel my pain,
so unfamiliar to you.
I feel this
every day,
caused by
things you do.
Feel the vibration
of my lungs,
as I scream my
way out.
Feel the incredible
sadness, when left
with nothing but doubt.

Take in these emotions,
that you didn’t know
you could feel.
Understand what it’s like
when it’s my hope
that you steal.
Through this,
you will only
think you know.
You’ll never know
what it’s like,
to have
no where to go.

Everyone

Uh, I do like the

"See me laugh,
so nervous
around you."

line more then the rest of the poem, but this is supposed to be some "depressing poem" that rhymes as well - but I'm afraid that doesn't make me feel sad at all. Instead of showing me how you feel, use those emotions to paint a vivid and lurid picture. I see you crying and with slit wrists...so what? A lot of people do that - but what they don't do is try to make me feel sad - just sad for them. I would suggest that you try something else.