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Old 11-30-2005, 09:17 AM   #1
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Abandonment

How can you just leave me alone?
Out in the world I know nothing about
How can you just leave me alone?
With nothing but the clothes on my back
Do you expect me to live on the streets?
How can you abandon your child?
The little girl you raised and cared for
The one you throw out only because she loved
Is it so wrong to ask to be with someone you love?
Don’t you think it’s wrong to leave me out in the world?
Don’t you think this will eat me alive?
To wake up every morning feeling like no one wants me
That I’m nothing but unwanted trash
What will become of me?
Don’t you even care?
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Old 11-30-2005, 12:50 PM   #2
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I can tell that something deep helped you write this, but I'm wanting more answers than questions, which maybe isn't what your goal was. I can feel the side you are showing, but I'm having a hard time identifying with the other subject, and I want too.
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Old 11-30-2005, 02:23 PM   #3
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I can feel the hurt and betrayal. It's very personal think.
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