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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 11-26-2005, 01:26 AM   #1
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Destination Dawn

Sail on sweetly to a honeymooners destination,
Take with you no memories of our times; our tempered winks and nods.
Wave goodbye to those who mourn not,
but leave no grace to the one who cries so softly.
Feel safe to publish your inner most feelings,
worry not about the slowing heart you leave behind.
Drink deeply from the wells of passion,
though dried compared to your lovers eyes.
I won't be going with you honey,
I can't leave my life behind.
Just promise me you'll live forever in cautious splendor,
away from prying lies.
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Old 11-26-2005, 01:49 AM   #2
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but leave no grace to the one who cries so softly.
I won't be going with you honey,
I can't leave my life behind.

I prefer these lines.
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