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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 11-24-2005, 09:40 PM   #1
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Goodbye

The warmth of my heart
slowly seeps through your grasp
forever echoing past you
lost eternally in darkness

Unspoken words stumble about
locked deep within wounds
defining my very life
hiding the true essence of me

Muted my emotions have become
deep within a void of black
seeking freedom from me
to be lain upon your heart

No tears to be wept
to slide gently upon your cheek
with an illusion of love
locked deep within

Stripped of the viel
wound taut around my soul
breaking down as I walk
forever leaving you behind.

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Old 11-25-2005, 10:01 PM   #2
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an illusion of love
After reading this, I felt that many things were complicated.
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Old 11-26-2005, 01:09 AM   #3
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Complicated in what form?
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