Sparx

Liberty’s Daughter

Upon the scarred surface of life; she crawls.
Her feet; broken by time, her eyes sightless,
yet still she moves, sometimes living in dreams,
hiding from Society’s preying eyes.

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"KNIVES AND RHYMES"

Psycho6058

It's a shame how true this is. Nicely phrased, Sparx.

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Sparx

Thanks Psycho6058 for the comment. Yeah it is a shame but thats life for you.

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"KNIVES AND RHYMES"

eleda

Hi Sparx, a succinct poem about the travails of the human spirit. Well Done. Cheers!

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Sparx

Thanks for the comments, eleda. They are much appreciated.

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richie

Indeed, a good piece of free poetry! I like it.
But it is so 'free-wrote' that it looks almost like prose.
A little more metaphors and symbolism should work. Just my opinion.

Thanks

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