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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 11-18-2005, 10:06 PM   #1
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Wink I'm sorry

I took your man out
for a ride
without asking
it ended up being
the best day of my life
There were so many
laughs and moans
that I couldn't stop
to count.

Don't deprive him of me
It was a wonderful
experience
and he feels the same

I took your man out
for a ride
without asking
I'm sorry,
but you're* such
a loser.


*Officially "He's"
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This was an assignment, so don't hate me, lol.
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Old 11-18-2005, 10:18 PM   #2
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That's awful and funny. I don't know that your teacher will appriciate the humor.
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Old 11-18-2005, 10:38 PM   #4
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The assignment was to write a poem about an apology that's not really an apology and I think she'll see the humor in this.
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