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Old 11-18-2005, 04:32 PM   #1
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eleda is on a distinguished road
Singular Purpose
Somatic sensation
Aerial detection
A singular purpose
No thoughts.
Doors closed
Cracks exposed
We’ll find a way through these blocks.
Never ceasing until mission completion
We get on your species’ nerves.
Building the dome for the “queen on the throne”
Is all we live to serve.
Crush us
Smash us
Douse us with spray,
We will not be deterred
We multiply everyday.
This is our home
We predate even Rome,
Egypt, and the Cro-magnon too.
Whatever you try
To devise to survive
We will be here a lot longer than you.
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Old 11-18-2005, 06:32 PM   #2
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LOL!
This poem is incredibly fun to read.
I interpreted it to be talking about some kind of paracidic but, perhaps an ant?
I loved this poem, and it was very well written
Keep up the great work eleda.
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Old 11-18-2005, 06:43 PM   #3
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yes I liked this. A nice playfulness. Cockroach?
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