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Our Love Is Like A Rowboat. Our Love Is Like A Rowboat.
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Old 11-17-2005, 08:59 PM   #1
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Our Love Is Like A Rowboat.
with a big hole in it

and it's sinking fast

in the fragile mercury

of my mind
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Old 11-18-2005, 12:17 AM   #2
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yay a boat, heh


very funny jjd

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excellent.

i like this very much.

sparse, and it doesn't need any more.

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Yes, I agree with the others. Very good as usual and in so few words.
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wonderful.

Ever heard the split enz song '6 months in a leaky boat'?
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thanks to salvothasock, ms. vodka, gohn67, and dannyboy for leaving comments on this poem.

have a interesting weekend.

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