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Old 11-15-2005, 07:58 AM   #1
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Aeroplane

My ears throb.
I scratch a jaw
in dire need
of a razor,
while my eyes
search for meaning
in the window
to avoid looking
at the snoring face
of the man beside me.

A tap on my shoulder,
and I take the drink
from the stewardess
smiling so invitingly.
The plane lurches,
and as everyone
screams and reaches
for oxygen masks,
I laugh inwardly
at their folly,
and text that apology
to my dad.
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Old 11-15-2005, 08:03 AM   #2
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Liked 'reunited' a bit better than this, but just a bit.
Obviously something happened that made a deep impression on you...
I hope you didn't loose someone, but if so, my deepest condolances.
Regards & a big hug,
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Old 11-15-2005, 08:04 AM   #3
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Nothing like that. I started writing this but one part developed into reunited, while I kept the other as this. I know what you mean though, I liked Reunited too.
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Old 11-15-2005, 08:08 AM   #4
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That's a relief.
You really have an eerie way of getting into someone else's mind. (This piece & 'Reunited', 'Bittersweet Waltz'...) You're a true poet, I'd say. Never, ever give up & try to get published!
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Old 11-15-2005, 08:13 AM   #5
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Being published was never really the objective, would you believe. And I wrote no poetry until I came upon these forums. After that, I was addicted. I like the Drift on Inn in the general discussion forum too. Its a great release.
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