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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 10-27-2005, 04:44 PM   #1
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Revival

Tundra, forest, valley and mountain you roam,
Willfull; born to restlessness, artfully you wage fear of capture
To ones weaker.

Brought down and almost extinct, you revived, returned
Living again, marking territory;
Giving birth to willfull generations.

Your prey: natural selection,
Your ememy: still man who does not understand
Your wanton call of the wild.

Ardent need to be free forever in your blood
The wind calls and response is a howl.
Sadness, lonliness;
Despair carried o’re the hills to
Another like kind
Who sends her cry loud and distinct.
Forward, you run
To She Who Needs

Litter born, young tended, testing, biting, playing;
No wallflowers here.
In this is your immortality

Predator, lover, parent and guardian,
Tending your wards, your mates with your life
The land will support and nourish you all
For it is, that your species was meant to be
A balance returned;
The wolf again free.
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Old 10-27-2005, 05:57 PM   #2
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Interesting....can't believe it was overlooked...I look foreward to seeing more of you around here...




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Old 10-27-2005, 05:59 PM   #3
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Your poem is written wild and free. The action moves from scene to scene in fluid frames of expression. Your lupine character study is representative of something we did right. Vision and motion on a grandiose scale. I liked your poem very much. Thank you.
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Old 11-29-2005, 10:50 PM   #4
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thanks for the good reviews. It won All Time Best in a contest with a blue ribbon......
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Old 11-30-2005, 12:43 AM   #5
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I like it...I like wolves too...good job.
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