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Old 10-04-2005, 12:26 PM   #1
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Oh joy, oh wonderful bliss
For though my heart did not miss
It so misses what it did
A friendship not to forbid
But now laced with the harsh tone
So like skin ripped from the bone

Pursicuted it would seem
Things not meant to be redeemed
Friendship twists in its own knots
The heart aches with it's own clots
Horrid paths that make you choose
Horrid paths that let you lose
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Persecuted was spelled wrong.

It seemed like you fluctuated from two different perspectives. One focusing in on the "before choice" side of things and the other "after choice" result. But it wasn't clear and simple when you switched.

Very nice all the same. =D>
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well, said person is not really regreting but missing the things she didn't choose
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