Sparx

Every Season

She’d walk through my garden
summer by her hand
flowers show off their petals
to impress her eyes

She’d buy my plants new coats
sing to tress during night
their leaves dance to the ground
to be picked by autumn’s hand

She’d dance to my seeds
spring is her dance partner
their bodies twist and turn
pouring life into my garden

She’d decorate my backyard
with winter as her stylist
painting the tress and plants
with snow

She’d leave my garden
though she will return soon
for her name is nature
and my garden is her sanctuary

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"KNIVES AND RHYMES"

Psycho6058

Very pretty and picturesque image. I like it.
I think the 3rd line "Of" should be "off" minor typo.

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103_smalls

It was really nice and flowery... the only thing I didn't like is that it seemd a bit dreamy too... one of them poems where it all seems to just be kind of floating around... I'm not sure if that's what you were going for or not, and I'm only one person... but that's just what I got out of it. Anyways, besides that this was great! Good man Sparx

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Sparx

Thanks for the reply Psycho6058. 103_smalls i did try to go for a more dreamy tone to create the essence of nature but i guess not all would like it. Thanks for replying man, appreciate your feedback.

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"KNIVES AND RHYMES"