bobbiego

Deleted by author. I didn't post this correctly to start out with, then I couldn't find out how to delete it before there was a comment, would just like to start over. Thanks...

Bobbie

VictorManuel

I think this is an interesting poem. It is short but describes the idea well and the ending is what I like the most.

Perhaps the second to last line could be separated in two?

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Desde que me cansé de buscar,
aprendí a encontrar
desde que un viento se me opuso,
navego con todos los vientos. -Nietzsche.

bobbiego

For reading and commenting on my poem...when I came back to check your response, I found I hadn't copied all the lines. I fixed it. I will consider making the second to last line 2 separate lines. Thanks for suggestion. It does look long compared to the rest.

Bobbie