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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 08-21-2005, 08:50 PM   #1
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Mind Over Matter

Mind
------
Matter

I have always been impressed
by a guy who shows indifference
to the contrivance of bare flesh.
More so, by one who can dismiss
the promise of a kiss
in favour of debate
to ruminate the meaning
of all this.

But I am equally as impressed
by a girl who can insist
that she does not want her lips
on his.
Though upon accepting his invitation
to academic stimulation
it is with absolute conviction
that breakfast will be thrown in.
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Old 08-21-2005, 09:12 PM   #2
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ah the free breakfast...

I really like this. I not really sure what else to write....but good job, look forward to reading more from you..

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Old 08-21-2005, 09:32 PM   #3
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I like this work.

It presents an interesting posture before an interesting issue, mind and matter without taking sides.
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Old 08-21-2005, 09:35 PM   #4
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Great work keep it up
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