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Old 08-17-2005, 03:51 AM   #1
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The Lonely Road

The Lonely Road

Wandering that lonely road i fall
Stand alone in shadows and i wait
A single soul walks down that hall

He comes to me, to show my fate
An angel from the darkest side
A trouble mind in fearless state

His goal i know will not be denied
As he looks at me with that grin
Even after everthing ive tried

I wait now for it too begin
It's soon i know i cant be wrong
A silence coming from within

I know i must try to be strong
Angel, soul mate, we now are one.
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Old 08-17-2005, 07:48 AM   #2
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You can ask just about anyone here, I'm not a huge fan of love poems. Probably because there are so many out there and it's so tough to write something that sounds new and fresh. I encourage you to write about the person you love rather than the emotion you feel. I believe there is more ability to create something new trying that.
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Old 08-17-2005, 11:31 PM   #3
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Hmmmmm maybe i need to work on this more if u thought it was a love poem. Its actually about obsession and death ..its not about loving someone its about being alone and never being able to have what u want.

But thanks for the idea!!!
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