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Old 08-15-2005, 06:39 PM   #1
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Saturnal
Still It
I never saw you before
waiting on the cold shoreline,
disowned by the world,
waiting for a dream to take you.
But your fallen eyes found me,
and we finally met there;
where whispers built a heaven
and tears washed us clean.
Maybe it was nothing;
maybe it was everything…
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Old 08-15-2005, 06:48 PM   #2
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the begining had me a little bit lost, but after reading it a few times, I think I started to get it... and the last two lines made me leap for joy... ok, so I didn't really leap... but they were real good and stuff...
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Old 08-15-2005, 08:21 PM   #3
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very pretty, surreal...

nice job saturnal.

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Old 08-16-2005, 09:05 AM   #4
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smallz - Yeah, you gotta feel it, not understand it

Vee - ty ty
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