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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
08-15-2005, 07:05 PM
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Fresh out of cookies, but there is a wee bit of my Marie Callender's Cherry Pie left... what I didn't finish off for lunch. That's a healthy lunch, right?
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08-15-2005, 09:18 PM
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Quote:
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Originally Posted by Nola
Fresh out of cookies, but there is a wee bit of my Marie Callender's Cherry Pie left... what I didn't finish off for lunch. That's a healthy lunch, right?
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*grabs six big macs and a 2-liter of mountain dew*
Of course that's healthy!
Thanks for the pie!
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GOD HELP ME!
IT'S THE SOUND THAT MAKES ME PUNCH INFANTS! (but not ms. vodka's)
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08-15-2005, 09:53 PM
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It reminds me of a poem I wrote, which is to say, it struck a chord with me. Unlike everyone else though, my favorite part is
"I'll use it
to cut my wrist
and spill crimson life,
my soul fitting
into words"
And why do your poems always remind me of song lyrics?!? I could devise a tune, and we could go into business together, lol.
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08-15-2005, 09:58 PM
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Yeah, I'm in one of those moods too... I have Soldier by Eminem stuck in my head right now, so no matter what I read, it always flows to that rythem, and there's always random "mother fucker"'s thrown in even when it's not actually in the poem... weird, really.
YAY, let's get rich!!
Anyway, I'll reply to all of your comments here by saying "thank you for reading my poems!!! Much appreciated.. I love feedback.  "
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GOD HELP ME!
IT'S THE SOUND THAT MAKES ME PUNCH INFANTS! (but not ms. vodka's)
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