gordon

Urban sound tracks my arm
Pulsing vein of the city
Hazy days freebase booms
White clouds smack down the sun
Evenings lit by neon cocaine
Spark a rift a line it’s a tune
Sulphate songs end so soon
Dazzled by diazepam it dims
Back to earth with the weeds
Urban soundtrack.

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Saturnal

Excellent. That's something city kitties like myself can relate to. I say don't change any of the words here, just add to it maybe. Like some kind of imagery associated with the streets and pavement or something. Cool poem.

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him from the city,
so him gotta be witty