On A Summer's Day - Writers Forum

bLuE_MoOn · 08-14-2005, 07:57 AM

On A Summer's Day

It's Winter on a summer's day
It's cold when the sun is out
The sounds of rain drowns me in my sorrows
And i call to thee to hold me
To tell me of a time so sweet
When sunlight dared to peek through
The shredded curtains
Of my silent solitude
And warm the days and melt the ice
So that i could feel again
And sigh and move
In shadowed lights and pray
To the angels above in heavenly light
To show me the way to a better life
Take me and move me
Rob me of my sanctity and tears
And then ill never be alone
Never fear and never scream again
Until the sun goes down once more
And falsehood wanes and it truly is winter.

Sparx · 08-14-2005, 11:59 AM

Great poem. The language is there and i really love the tone of the poem. Its very slow and has this sad voice to it. Nice peice.

103_smalls · 08-14-2005, 12:28 PM

awesome. It was pretty cool, I saw a summer beach, with snow blowing in the wind but never touching the ground, and behind it in the sky was a face, and it looked sad... thank you for putting this... err... bizzare image in my head!