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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 08-14-2005, 07:55 AM   #1
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Some new poems ...

When It Began

When it began
It was like heaven was close by
When it began
It was you and i, women and man
I never questioned how or why
I did not feel compelled to lie
When it began.

An Open Road

An open road
Stretched before me on the sky
An open road
Begging me to travel down its path
Mysteries i cannot decode
I call to thee my last goodbye
An open road.

I Hear You Say

I hear you say
Your words so softly spoken to me
I hear you say
You will love me forever and a day
I look at you and cannot see
How you could feel those things for me
I hear you say
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Normally, I don't care for multiple poems in one post because I find it distracting. However, with this trio I read them as one and it made sense to me.
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