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Old 08-13-2005, 10:42 PM   #1
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Ruby Red

I made a promise
yesterday
that I will surely
break today.

It's harder being
close to you
than I imagined...
what to do?

You sit there glowing
in the light
all curves and angles
pure delight.

My will is failing
as we speak
unhealthy desire
reaching peak

My hands are shaking
mouth goes dry
I damn who made you...
Cherry Pie.

[an:6123893b74]Ha. Thought you knew where that was going, didn't you? *laughs* I just had my first Marie Callender's Cherry Pie... OMFG.[/an:6123893b74]
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Old 08-13-2005, 11:11 PM   #2
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Yes nola, marie is a person with much sin in her body. I think she expresses it best in her pies and such.
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Penelope is an unknown quantity at this point
all I want to know is - was it a lattice topped cherry pie?
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Old 08-14-2005, 12:54 AM   #4
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not bad.....how long did it take you to write this....looks like you sat down and did it quickly
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Old 08-14-2005, 02:03 AM   #5
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Burnz- I've never eaten the regular food at her restaurant, but I can now safely say that the road to hell is paved with her pies.

Penelope- Nope, it was regular, but it was soooooooo good. I just went downstairs and had more, god help me. I could explode at any moment...

Dark Elf- I'm not sure how to take that, lol, but yes, I wrote it quickly. I was just having a bit of fun after stuffing myself to a ridiculous extent. My serious pieces do tend to take more time, but this was more along the lines of an experiment. I had a good time writing Plot of the Furball, which went over well and was also a new thing for me, so I decided to try something else outside my usual comfort zone.

Thanks to all of you for stopping by and commenting. Anyone want to come staple me to this chair before I can eat again?
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