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Old 08-13-2005, 08:31 AM   #1
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The Way of the Dragon:

The gardener feeds the dragon
every late autumn
through winter,
in light that mists
rather than highlights,
he tosses gold and red scales
onto the dragon’s form -
even as it slumbers it grows.
I stand by the window
watching the gardener
return over and over;
scales overflowing
from his black barrow -
a finger of mine
touches the glass,
leaves an imprint there,
a stain
to be dealt with later.
I have watched this scene
through several years
and been witness to
the dragon’s growth spurts
and the way it shrinks,
partly, in summer:
a waxing and waning
as the relationships
between gardener, scales and dragon
intensifies and cools – reminding me
of my wife’s first smile
and her cool eyes today.
The slumbering dragon
gains girth -
scales slide into position
the way words
can escape a mouth
and never be returned.
The gardener continues to feed
The dragon, his breathe
exhaling in small mounds of smoke
as if he too breathes fire -
behind me
my wife sits reading;
the silence between us
another dragon -
I wait for the sleeping to end.
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Old 08-13-2005, 06:40 PM   #2
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A compost heap of a dragon? Is that what this is? If so, how interesting to compare it to a relationship.
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Old 08-13-2005, 07:26 PM   #3
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god it is so damned hot here.

perhaps that is why i am having a hard time understanding this.

i am going to come back and comment to it when my brain is not like warm jello.

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Old 08-13-2005, 10:14 PM   #4
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you got it Pen!

hey MsV it may not be the heat, but rather the poet.
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Old 08-13-2005, 11:25 PM   #5
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Truer comparisons were ne'er written before. Thanks for the great read dannyboy!
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Old 08-14-2005, 03:46 AM   #6
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