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Old 07-31-2005, 07:06 PM   #1
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He heard laughter
before he saw it


Sandals...

shirts...

shorts...

bras...

panties...



...Paradise...
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Old 07-31-2005, 07:12 PM   #2
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I love laughing out loud first thing in the morning - so a big thank you M2005. This is simple, simply great, great stuff. huni.
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Old 07-31-2005, 07:19 PM   #3
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Umm....thanks for reading...glad to make you laugh.....give my heart great pleasure...lol

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cute!... for better impact, i suggest dropping the ellipses around the final word and ending with a !

and get rid of all that empty space... single spacing will work better... check it out:

He heard laughter
before he saw it.

Sandals...
shirts...
shorts...
bras...
panties...

Paradise!
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Old 08-01-2005, 08:36 PM   #5
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i liked this one.

i liked this one a lot.

john. john doe.
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Old 08-01-2005, 10:33 PM   #6
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Hahahaha. Awesome. Loved it.
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