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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
07-31-2005, 02:34 PM
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Best Seller
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Fo Snizzy
hey yo!
am i too young to free a base
caught a sickness-
tastes like marcy is clean, again
jolt a cold one
sinister float(ing) son
hey foe!
bring me my slimy spot
tastes like someones heart
break a noise in the new scene
go now, and forever hold your piece
AJB
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07-31-2005, 02:38 PM
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Interesting. I like how the poem jolts around to different ideas and "places." Don't quite understand what you are getting at with the poem, but still very interesting.
War
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07-31-2005, 07:19 PM
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agreed 100% with warlock: i enjoyed it, but I have no clue what you're getting at  heeheehee
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GOD HELP ME!
IT'S THE SOUND THAT MAKES ME PUNCH INFANTS! (but not ms. vodka's)
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08-01-2005, 12:18 PM
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salvo, you are an excellent poet with a very refreshing style.
your work almost never fails to disappoint me.
i hope you will seek publication in the future.
vodka
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08-01-2005, 05:07 PM
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thanks dudes and dudettes, i (heart) you all,
especially my good friend jen, i really (heart) you
i'm not jus sayin that either...
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08-01-2005, 05:10 PM
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*blows salvo many kisses and hopes he'll send her a pm someday... or an email... or sumpin sumpin*
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08-01-2005, 10:45 PM
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gigi, as right as rain you are
ps i saw the original psycho house, it was in florida i think
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