bettyblack

we will soon be buried
but all i can feel
is sugar melting on my tounge
mixed with salty air
rain exaporates as it hits the bubbling cement
and he who is a demon spawn
with metal lips and hair that smells like brine
of lipstick stains on soda tops
with plastic skin that drips
to gather in boiling puddles
we’re lost in a sand castle
waiting for the tide

ms. vodka

this one is also nicely done...

man, you must live in a really hot climate! you need to move to oregon... no shoes sticking to pavement and all that...

one question... did you mean "evaporates" and not "exaportates"?

interesting work so far... i look forward to reading more.

vodka

bettyblack

Actually, I live in Massachusetts. It's bellow 30 and sleeting for 9 months then suddenly it gets disgustingly hot.

I wrote this on one of those hot days. My father used to live in Oregon, it's really nice there apparently. He wants to go back.

Thanks for the feedback!

And yes I meant evaporates....