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of a wind inside of a wind inside
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Old 07-24-2005, 05:40 PM   #1
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of a wind inside
wind sneaks inside me.
feeling the gloom on my chest
and not knowing why.
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It has something...it got me to read it three times, searching for meaning. Does the wind feel the gloom, or do you feel the gloom. Is the wind the gloom? Just a little confusing, but I like cadence.
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