BookLover

This is my very first attempt at poetry.
I know its stupid, but, hey, give me a chance


This is my first try
At writing a poem
It does not have a name
Nor any theme

Hope I write something good
And hope you like it
So that I can write more poems
And to this forum I submit

What made me do this?
Do you wonder?
My heart said try something new
And I had to surrender

What do I gain by this?
I can't really say
Make me write more of them
Or deter me, to my dismay

Its a very short one
Not too tough to read
It doesn't make you think
Or doesn't even mislead

If you think this is readable
Then you made my day
I can pat myself on the back
And sing and dance and sway

So, read it and let me know
What you think of this piece
Should I continue with this adventure
Or should I rest in peace?

gohn67

Hey Sanyjua,
This made me smile. And I got a good feeling reading this line. I'm glad you wrote this poem and hope to see more.

Its = It's

I like this poem because it's truthful and real.

I hope you write more. As long as you write with heart and truth, I don't think you can ever go wrong with a poem. I like how you don't try to be cryptic also, especially for your first poem.

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ms. vodka

cute. i hope you keep writing. i'd like to see what you come up with next before i critique your work.

vodka

BookLover

Thanks sO much, gohn

Believe me, it took me a lot of guts to put it up here!


Thanks vodka! I will post something as soon as I write something