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the still of a heartbeat the still of a heartbeat
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Old 06-26-2005, 11:02 PM   #1
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the still of a heartbeat
lying between sheets
suddenly realizing
i hear your heartbeat
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Very nice. I like this Haiku a lot xemox. The image of stillness was well done. You could take the middle I out by saying

suddenly realising

Or you could tell me to mind my own business. huni.
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i like, i like. thanks huni!
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