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Old 06-19-2005, 03:06 PM   #1
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To a distant Friend/Big Sis.........to Ms.VODKA
Lately
I find myself
wondering

Sitting
here on this
brown chair

Uncomfortable
yet I sit
and ponder

Curious
how you
are

Hoping
you're doing
fine

Silently
praying nothing's
happened

My distant
friend and sister
alike

I wouldn't know
what to do
without you

Your
saving grace keeps
me sane

your words
are a comfort
to my tears

Where ever
you are
now

Know that
I MISS
YOU
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Old 06-23-2005, 10:36 PM   #2
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Jess,

Somehow, I missed this... sorry!

I'm around, hit my email... please, i lost your address...

with love,

jen
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Old 06-23-2005, 10:59 PM   #3
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Huh! When am I going to get one of these
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Old 06-23-2005, 11:44 PM   #4
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someday... my friend... someday.



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Old 06-24-2005, 12:33 AM   #5
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Dannyboy the pipes - the pipes are blo-owing. From glen to glen and doown the mountain siiiiiide.



What do you mean it's not original?! (Goes huffily away to write something for Danny.) h.
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Old 06-24-2005, 12:57 AM   #6
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Danae
Just write her
a letter instead
of

writing a
poem, because
that is

what normal
people
do
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Old 06-24-2005, 01:03 AM   #7
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Normal!? We are not normal. We are poets damn it!
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Old 06-24-2005, 02:41 AM   #8
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This was obviously a very effective piece as it reached it's intended recipient.

Very nicely written I thought. the simple phrasing somehow blend into a paean to friendship.

Danae's right about reaching out, but then we wouldn't have got to read this.
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Old 06-24-2005, 11:11 AM   #9
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sometimes ms. vodka is not as easy to reach as she may seem...

the poem was well written, and murdershewrote's work seems to be progessing very nicely to me.

if she just amended the title, no one would know!

i think she knew this would grab my attention, which is sometimes hard to grab if it's not poetry...

once again, sorry jess, that i made you feel like you had to do this to grab my attention... that does not make me a very good friend.

but you know, you can always drop me a pm too...

jen
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Old 06-24-2005, 10:27 PM   #10
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i dig this poem so very much.

there's just so much to like about its simple. cool lines.

sincerely,

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