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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 06-19-2005, 10:29 AM   #1
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Kamisama has a little shameless behaviour in the past
another poem

Crayola crayola
I see you on the wall
child of doom what have you done
you wake to torture us in this hot hot sun
we care for you
we tend to you
yet you don't play by the rules
hopefully you won't do this in the public schools.
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Old 06-19-2005, 10:42 AM   #2
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One of those moments that in later times you'll think of with nostalgia. I reckon when they're 13 or so.

Cute number this, & brings to mind that resigned expression when, once more, they're confronted with the handiwork of rampant progeny.

I got a grin from it, even if it didn't do so for you. (sorry)
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