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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 06-16-2005, 04:12 AM   #1
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my eye
is caught by a photograph

flashing the reaches
a once barren sky
crowding

my ear
records a voiceless cry

whispering brilliant streaks
fine hairs all quivering on
my skin

raindrops pelting
crystal teeth glaring
teary distances bridged

my tongue
forms a quiet reply

rasping mouthfuls
incoherent drivel
spittle on my lips

my nose
wiggling at a brooding sky

effervescent lifting
moisture of the first
blanket on grass


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Old 06-16-2005, 07:01 AM   #2
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I love the images here, this is a wonderful piece.
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Old 06-16-2005, 12:44 PM   #3
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yes, very nice images...

one of those pieces that can have a different meaning for each person who reads it...

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Old 10-04-2005, 04:31 AM   #4
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yes, very nice images...

one of those pieces that can have a different meaning for each person who reads it...

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Thanks for that comment.
Sorry I was away for a while
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Old 10-04-2005, 12:59 PM   #5
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sallright... gotta do whatcha gotta do...

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