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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
06-14-2005, 07:17 AM
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Mentor
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: South Australia
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Sunset
Last light fading
orange tinge on the beach
Sun setting now
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06-14-2005, 07:53 AM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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Aha!
referral to start
describing sunlight glowing
haiku built right, now
& a nice image too!
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06-14-2005, 07:55 AM
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Mentor
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Yes! I did it! \ / |
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06-14-2005, 08:07 AM
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Ink Slinger
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asian form explodes
ip storms of format true
haiku now from Besh
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*He has never been known to use a word that might send a reader to the dictionary - William Faulkner (about Ernest Hemingway)
*Poor Faulkner. Does he really think big emotions come from big words? - Ernest Hemingway (about William Faulkner)
*Thank you for sending me a copy of your book; I'll waste no time reading it - Moses Hadas
*He can compress the most words into the smallest idea of any man I know - Abraham Lincoln
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06-15-2005, 02:27 AM
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Mentor
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ooh yeah and maybe more to come |
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06-15-2005, 09:05 PM
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Writer
Join Date: Mar 2005
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I like the image of the sunset. Though short and haiku it describes it well.
"Sunrise, sunset, sunrise, sunset...."
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06-16-2005, 03:47 AM
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Writing Machine
Join Date: May 2004
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You did! Keep going. Besh I hope this link works, it's to a poster who I think is one of the best Haiku writer we have seen here and rather than be bound by 5-7-5 he writes in true Japanese Haiku style. Really lovely work IMO. hope you enjoy him. regards huni
http://www.writingforums.com/viewtop...highlight=huni
Yippee! I just edited this to correct some spelling and that link thingie works!!
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