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07-24-2005, 10:54 AM
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thats true and i have nothing else to enter...ironically i have had an acute case of procrastination SINCE i wrote this poem...
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07-24-2005, 11:00 AM
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hmmm-mmm!... think there's a connection???
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07-24-2005, 11:01 AM
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maybe i should just throw that damned pen away and get a less condescending one... 
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07-24-2005, 05:23 PM
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You talk to pens. I talk to myself. But we both get the job done.
So, henceforth, here are some caps:
IF YOU CAN RHYME, YOU SHOULD BE KING OF TOWNE AND RULE THE TEEMING NO-BRAINS WITH CAREFULLY PLUCKED WORDS FROM YOUR APPLE-TREE.
Are you just dying to see the Corpse Bride? It's the "sequel" to Burton's "Nightmare."
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07-26-2005, 05:17 PM
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i am looking forward to the corpse bride...but i was devastated to learn that there was not going to be as much musical tomfoolery
still should be good.
I shall open the reading of the poem with the words 'These words have been carefully plucked from my apple-tree'. Then they'll really think i'm mad as Poe and then appreciate the style.
kin
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07-26-2005, 07:14 PM
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Then I award you with: A+++
Yes, you will get noticed and it will be my doing. I am pleased. So: Congratulations. I'm sure Poe is just bemused with your undying gratitude for his works. As am I..................................
Man, it's hot in here. It's about 90 friggin' degrees! But it's not the heat that gets to you; it's the humidity... as you might have noticed in my case. Anyway, that's my excuse for the usual oddity you all put up with.
OH, gorsh. I think the music in Nightmare was meant to be more geared up in the holiday fashion whereas Corpse Bride is just Burton's way of saying, "Yes. I am strange. Thanks for noticing." Also, Johnny Depp voices the main male character in Corpse (man, that's a hard word to type correctly the first time around) and as in the case with Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, he wasn't keen on singing in that movie, either. Then again, in Nightmare they had some other dude do the singing instead of the main actor. Who knows? I don't care either way...although, I wouldn't mind getting, "What's this?" stuck in my head right now. I am currently wondering, "What is this weather? Gorghe!!!" In conclusion, I take a long time to get to my point.
Whoa, that was a significantly long entry. Plz excuse whilst I retrieve a drink of water. ::dashes with the speed of an out-of-work Superhero!
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07-27-2005, 12:24 PM
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lol that was almost a poem in itself!
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07-28-2005, 11:08 PM
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Incredible. We should totally be BFFs.
I was just muttering because I was oxygen depraved. And I quote, ' "Do you even realize what you're saying?" "Eh, sometimes."' Like I said, it was HOTTTTT that day. I remember ditching my shirt and just walking around the house in a bra (whoa, I'm totally, like, not a dude!! Which, I'll bet will come as a shock to some people who first thought I was a boy. lolz. I gave away my secret intentionally. Not that it was much of one but still. I enjoyed being androgynous). Yeah, I'm thinking if that freakin' humidty comes back, I'll be prepared to attack it with my exposed skin and that will absorb the wetness in the air. And I shall conquer all.
Hey, this post gives me an idea for "have you ever...?" I've gots to go now. Heck yes!
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07-29-2005, 12:10 AM
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This is one of my all time favorites. Good Job!!
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07-29-2005, 10:06 AM
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"oxygen depraved." [rotflmao]
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07-29-2005, 10:11 AM
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Kintaris, I am with the gang, this poem is excellent. I could see myself fighting with my pen as well. Wonderfully funny. Thank you for sharing.
Nae ;0)
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07-29-2005, 01:13 PM
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my first three-paged thread! woo!
 ok its a bit of a strange thing to get excited about.
thankyou all so much - you're all...very...nice people! (as you can see my adjectives have been drained)
kin
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11-17-2005, 09:32 PM
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Very entertaining!!!! I like your stuff Kin, I will continue to watch for more and read and comment. But I'm not always so nice.
Mm
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