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Old 06-01-2005, 12:46 PM   #1
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Postmodern smoke cigarette.
Aesthetic on the floor.
Chalked-up outline -- his
body. (buy 3, get one
more)

Porcelain Dolly witness.
Camp (scrambled egg hemline)
wear wallpaper dress -- like
headlight. (now just
19.99)

Prentension point finger.
Kitsch (gaudy plastic ring)
bob his head -- like
doggy. (just take the awful
thing)
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the flow was weird but not in a bad way. All in all i think this was really good and i like the mock-capitalist theme (i am assuming you're poking in the ribs of commercialism). i dig it.
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