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Old 05-20-2005, 07:39 PM   #1
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Saddleworth Moor.

Weighed down by grey she struggles to lift her self from the heather
Misty tears caress her for too long then leave in the wind
Blurring into one with the millennia stretching to leave an ache
In all who watch or walk upon her in savage beauty she remains alone
Horizons come close to her as they settle at her edge
Streaks of grey betray her age as they crumble into a stream
Man made walls hewn from her bones fall over time
Each shriek in a gale each cloud in a storm is lost here
As are we all on the moor
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Old 05-20-2005, 08:31 PM   #2
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gordon- I really liked the language and the imagery in this one. You have a cool style. Sorry, it's not much more intelligent than that. But carry on!
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Old 05-20-2005, 09:05 PM   #3
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Marius thank you
Gigi saddleworth moor is a very bleak place on the borders of Yorkshire and Lancashire in england
It is also infamous as the burial site of the child murderers Ian Brady and Myra Hindley in the sixties
2 children are still unaccounted for buried somewhere on the moor
As a place it is magnificent bleak wild and untouchable
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