white~water

Golden Locks. Thrown up
Against bed.

3 Wise men. Guns.
Erect and ready.
More mechanical to them

Pain hits. Wave after Wave,
Drowning.
She screams as
Hair is pulled from her
Head

And bites down on his



Bobbit rhymes with
Hobbit
She pervesly thinks

This is no middle earth,
House in the woods,
Grim fairy tale.
Twisted.
Distorted.

Only came in for some food…
Got much more than she bargained for.

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i hope that when the world comes to an end i can breathe a sigh of relief because there will be so much to look foward to
~Donnie Darko~

xemoxlovex

one word: brilliant

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twist my heart into a dream
where i can finally breathe

white~water

thank you nicest thing anyone has said on here to me!!

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i hope that when the world comes to an end i can breathe a sigh of relief because there will be so much to look foward to
~Donnie Darko~

xemoxlovex

why this has not been said to you before i may never understand. i printed this off and tacked it onto my wall.

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twist my heart into a dream
where i can finally breathe

white~water

thank you for sharing that - has given me more faith in my writing abilities (or lack of!)

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i hope that when the world comes to an end i can breathe a sigh of relief because there will be so much to look foward to
~Donnie Darko~

MariusBonaparte

Very good. Has a cool stream of conciousness feel to it. And a good message which is delivered in excellent manner.