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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
03-10-2005, 12:00 PM
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Logging In
If it were all this simple,
username, password,
and you’re all logged in.
Tired, frustrated,
weary and down,
one quick motion, logged out.
If life were truly like this,
I’d log out, reboot and be up and
running smoothly once more.
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Years of practice only to find, practice is for amateurs. Live life without a script...
Renae L. Soler
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03-10-2005, 12:09 PM
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Very cool Nae.
And exceptionally true.
Bravo.
Vodka
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03-10-2005, 12:13 PM
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Nae, I don't often gush, but I'd like to take this opportunity to tell you just how great a person you are and how we all are so lucky to have you.
Life sucks sometimes and checking out looks rather attractive for all of us at one time or another.
You deserve a big HUG for hanging in there!
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03-10-2005, 12:16 PM
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Miss Vodka, thank you so much, glad you thought it was cool. I am ready to press the delete button in my life, lol.
Pen, you don't know how much that means to me. Thank you so much. You made my day!
Nae
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Years of practice only to find, practice is for amateurs. Live life without a script...
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03-10-2005, 12:33 PM
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I won't Gigi, I'll send it to the trash can first! At least I can bring it back to life from there.
Nae ;0)
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Years of practice only to find, practice is for amateurs. Live life without a script...
Renae L. Soler
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03-10-2005, 02:01 PM
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I'm stunned, it's as if you've written my life down in that.
Creepy.
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03-10-2005, 02:22 PM
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Mazzie, I hope that is not too bad a thing! Welcome to the forums.
Nae
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03-10-2005, 02:25 PM
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nah, it's not a bad thing, because I've already done the log out and reboot and am up and running again.
Thanks for welcoming me, am feeling kinda invisible here...  |
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03-10-2005, 02:28 PM
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Mazzie I am happy you are all booted up!!! Keep hanging around, I promise you won't feel invisible for long!
Nae
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03-10-2005, 02:33 PM
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03-10-2005, 03:31 PM
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Interesting idea for a poem.
At first I thought this piece was just about logging in and logging out, literally.
Or maybe I tried to hard to dig for something deeper.
I am not too good at finding deeper meaning in poetry.
To me it sounded like a metaphor to life and wouldn't be nice to just turn yourself off from the world when you don't feel like living it. And then turn yourself back on when you want to live again.
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03-10-2005, 03:37 PM
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Gohn67, you got it, that is exactly what I was saying, sometimes I just feel like I want to log out till I can deal with it. But I always know I will be logging back in.
Thanks for reading.
Nae
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03-10-2005, 03:40 PM
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Nae, I love this poem. That is EXACTLY how I feel right now.
*gives Nae a standing ovation*
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03-10-2005, 04:17 PM
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Aeryn, I can imagine this is what you are feeling right now, but you will reboot soon girl! We are all rooting for you!!!!
Hugs*
Nae
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03-10-2005, 04:57 PM
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Hmm, maybe that is what I need to do.... Good idea, Lord only knows what my scan would show...
Nae ;0)
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