gordon

Forever light lingers in your hair
Fingers create a cathedral of love in a moment
Copper to gold blurring the sunset
Runs down into my heart as it flows
A halo so fragile, glows for that moment to last a lifetime

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rashadow

I would say that it was short and sweet(and it is), but by doing so I would be leaving out the fact that, even though it is a whole truth written in verse, it seems somewhat incomplete.

How's that for a run on sentence.

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huni

Gordon, I caught this the other day but didn't have time to comment. But you know how I love this one. Still can see the light in the lifted hair and it still outshines even a sunset. Nice to see it's return. Lucky girl. huni.

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Mazzie

I like this one. You've written it in a way that makes me see the poem happen in front of me.