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Old 02-20-2005, 10:36 PM   #1
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Compassion
Walk with God
You, who toil in troubled lands
To weave compassion's silver thread
Mid tattered strands

You clutch the spark of hope
In childrens eyes
And strive to fan a flame
Before it dies

With Christ, you mend the wounds
And still the fear
As from the cross you bring
Compassion's endless tear
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gosh, golly, and gee whiz!... i'm an agnostic atheist, but have to agree with luis... in toto...

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ps: that said, to include all people of all faiths [and none], all you need do is change 'christ' to 'love' and 'cross' to 'heart'... m
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