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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 02-20-2005, 05:49 AM   #1
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Sweet Wonder

Sweet Wonder

In the street I find
my place amongst the grime,
Underneath the breeze
amongst the better sleeze.

On the sands I walk
on the wrinkled face of the moon,
sitting on the crest of antiquated dunes,
and from here the aroma of salt -
from oceans that froze against the rock.

Through the forest branch
an efficacious melody from the wild nest,
A munificent peace down this path
keeps the troubles off of every man.

Just a human amongst the crumble,
a neoteric speck in this tundra.
No matter the land I cross
No matter the words to mollify my thoughts
Still a newborn to this all;
Amongst this millenium boom,
like a flash of light, my trails will end soon.

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Old 02-21-2005, 12:03 AM   #2
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soothing and entrancing.
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Old 02-21-2005, 12:32 AM   #3
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nice work...i love the fun imagary it creates in my mind
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Old 02-21-2005, 02:04 AM   #4
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The eternal quest to matter and yet knowing how brief our impact is poignantly expressed. I too loved your imagery and unique turn of phrase.Thanks for sharing
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Old 02-21-2005, 02:44 AM   #5
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Old 02-21-2005, 02:45 AM   #6
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